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Ok, if you really want to get into the nitty-gritty of it, we can do that. The semicolon was acceptable in that use, but both parts of the sentence referenced the class, they weren't really interdependent. Besides, assertational ideas are generally more effective when kept in shorter sentences. So basically, yes, it was more a stylistic change than a grammatical change - and it could 'legally' go both ways - but I think my way looks cleaner.



Here again we are getting into the argument of what is acceptable and what is proper. "That" is used to introduce a subordinate clause as the subject or object of the principal verb in this sentence (long, drawn-out description courtesy of dictionary.com). Basically, you have two noun/verb pairs in your sentence ("I would hope" and "You could have taken"), and they need a conjunction to separate them in order for the sentence to be technically correct; that is why I put "that" there.

You can't out-grammar-**** the Grammar ****. John can attest to this. :3gears:

I'm glad you grasped the intent of my original post :facepalm:. Yes, I can out-grammar you without the use of researching before hand.
 

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Ok, if you really want to get into the nitty-gritty of it, we can do that. The semicolon was acceptable in that use, but both parts of the sentence referenced the class, they weren't really interdependent. Besides, assertational ideas are generally more effective when kept in shorter sentences. So basically, yes, it was more a stylistic change than a grammatical change - and it could 'legally' go both ways - but I think my way looks cleaner.



Here again we are getting into the argument of what is acceptable and what is proper. "That" is used to introduce a subordinate clause as the subject or object of the principal verb in this sentence (long, drawn-out description courtesy of dictionary.com). Basically, you have two noun/verb pairs in your sentence ("I would hope" and "You could have taken"), and they need a conjunction to separate them in order for the sentence to be technically correct; that is why I put "that" there.

You can't out-grammar-**** the Grammar ****. John can attest to this. :3gears:

I'm glad you grasped the intent of my original post :facepalm:. Yes, I can out-grammar you without the use of researching before hand.

You two need some alone time?

Bromance.

:implied facepalm:
 

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:*******:

lol. Look, generally I know what's right, and generally I know when I'm right, but I like to have sources when I'm explaining why I'm right. Personally, I was expecting the ******* in reponse to the first post. And yeah, I was totally just stirring up s#%* in the last post, but I am soooooooooooooooooooo bored right now... :wave:
 

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I'll bored you!

The ":*******:" was more in reference to the "Bromance" comment. It's kind of like "butt-to-nut", just with your face. I'm pretty board too. Just car shopping and put an offer on a car one state away with 14k miles :)
 

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I'll bored you!

The ":*******:" was more in reference to the "Bromance" comment. It's kind of like "butt-to-nut", just with your face. I'm pretty board too. Just car shopping and put an offer on a car one state away with 14k miles :)

don't hate me cause you two are in love....


:p
 

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Jason, There are at least 3 errors in your sentance.

Delete "the use"
Misplaced comma.
"beforehand" is a contraction, not two separate words.

Yes I can out-grammar you. Furthermore, I can out-grammar you without researching beforehand.

kthxbye.
 

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Jason, There are at least 3 errors in your sentance.

Delete "the use"
Misplaced comma.
"beforehand" is a contraction, not two separate words.

Yes I can out-grammar you. Furthermore, I can out-grammar you without researching beforehand.

kthxbye.


Ok, four things:

a) Both YamahaSHO and I are "Jason". To whom are you referring?

b) The entire point of my first post (technically, second post) was that when one is correcting another on the use of grammar and correct spelling, one should take care to ensure that he is not himself making those same mistakes. Perhaps I should've been more clear.

c) I didn't do any research at any point in my first post. The research I did was for the counter-counterargument in order to back my claims up. I don't need research to tell somebody they're wrong.

d) You spelled "sentence" wrong. :munch::snicker:

Edit: Irony: I am, in actuality, eating popcorn right now. Delicious cake is delicious!
 
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Fun has passed... But anything under the number 10 should be spelled out (Jason already hit the "sentance" part).

- If you want me to delete "the use", I would need to delete "of" as well.
- Comma is fine.

There was nothing technically wrong with my sentance, however, if you want to nit-pick I could write it in ebonics YO!

In short, you could understand what I was typing...


Jason, there is no "Y" in "yamahaSHO" :) <-- IRloser
 
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wait, did this thread have a point at some point? :rofl:

yes the point of this thread was............ umm wait.. the point of this thread is...........


oh ****, the current point of the thread seems to be.........

ok nevermind.
 

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